Alexa, Play “Despacito”
In the tumultuous society that we
find ourselves living in, there isn’t a more underrated pastime than doing
nothing. The world around us is moving at 1037 mph. Most people think they must
keep racing around, caught up in the plague of hustle culture. Why not take a
break for a little while and enjoy the ride?
Slow up. Take a deep breath. Put off
that nagging worry that you’re convinced will be the end of the world. I’m sure
you’ll be just fine. Try doing just a little bit of nothing. Trust me, it’ll
help you enjoy life some more. You’ll get time to enjoy your present situation
or reassess your priorities. Maybe even get the opportunity to just give your
brain a chill pill for a little while and let the neurons rest. They don’t have
to fire 24/7/365 for your lifetime.
It’s like giving your body and brain
the option to recuperate. Take, for example, my athletics career. Every day I
push my body to the limit. This would be impossible to maintain for every
waking second. I’d get badly injured, now no longer able to perform any
physical activity. Our brain works the same way. It’s valuable to take a second
to sit back and focus upon the void, allowing your brain to hit the mental
reset button. Your brain is given the chance to recalibrate itself to a healthy
working state. It’s in a similar vein to what we do when we sleep, except you perform
a different operation. In sleep, we turn ourselves off and back on again,
hoping the bugs fix themselves. When you do nothing, you remain in authority,
honing your mind until your sense of self is defined again. You can do nothing
as long as you want, seizing control from the outward pressures of society.
Is there anything more precious than
your sense of self? If who you feel you are is a distortion of what you could
truly be, then you have found yourself in a tricky paradigm. Few among our
modern society have not fallen into this trap, however. We find ourselves in a
funhouse, the one with the warping mirrors. Hustle culture is the mirror. Try
doing nothing, turning introspectively to study yourself. The mirror will
shatter.
Everything is only good in
moderation, of course. You must find a balance within yourself. This balance is
unique to each and every individual; it is only you who can determine exactly
what you need. If you eat 5 chicken breasts at once, you’ll probably get quite
sick. A power lifter may get quite happy, content to support their gains. We’re
all different. Just as you may need to do less of nothing, I may need to do
more. If either of do too much of nothing, we may end up brainrotted. You are
still a member of society, at least, I hope. Go experience it, live the life
you would like for yourself, but be careful not to overcommit yourself to
everything.
It is such a joy that we live within
a society where doing nothing is a possibility. You possess the base luxuries
not provided to those of our ancestors. Food and drink come easily to most, yet
we still find that we are pushed to gain more. We do not properly appreciate
the situation we find ourselves in. You do not live in a Fast & Furious
movie, no matter how much you wish you could. It sure sounds fun to always live
in the fast lane, but the second that things get serious, you may not have time
to focus on your true values. Take the time to free your mind from the clutches
of our fast-paced society, for you never know when you’ll ever escape the
trance again.
For the reader:
I'd appreciate your general thoughts on this piece. I feel like there's some key ideas, but it may struggle to accentuate the main points as it strikes a balance between relatability and personal experience. Let me know what you think! Thank you!!!
Hey Collins,
ReplyDeleteYour essay is engaging, with a strong voice and vivid imagery, like the funhouse mirror metaphor. The personal reflection on athletics reinforces the need for rest, but the main takeaway could be clearer. I think the points you make are valid, but try to connect them closer to yourself. Maybe adding a couple more personal examples could help? At the end, when discussing the need for rest as life gets serious, especially as many of these readers are entering adulthood, you could expand on this idea and reflect on its importance in that transition. Fantastic start!
Dear my dear Collins, this essay has brought tears to my eyes and new thoughts to my overworked brain. I really loved the different perspective of life you sought to bring up, especially with the idea of slowing down instead of speeding up. Howver, I feel like this essay seems a bit far from yourself. While you did relate your ideology to yourself in the example of your sports life, the rest of the essay felt less like a story about yourself and more of an essay giving advice to me. If you include more details, examples, or stories relating to yourself or your development, I think this essay could be even better. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the figurative language and references you used. I think your essay is coherent, and you do a good job in explaining why doing nothing is beneficial.
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